Chapter 5 Moving In
Valerie Point of View
That evening the city lights glowed through the thick fog as I pulled up in Sofia’s old gray car in front of Ruiz Combat Gym. My whole body ached from head to toe. Every muscle still burned from the hard lesson Damian had given me in the ring.
I walked inside carrying my sore ribs carefully. My father sat at his messy desk, turning the dials on an old radio. Sofia stood near the bags, wrapping her hands with white tape out of habit even though she could no longer fight.
When they saw me with dirt on my face and a split lip, they both froze.
“Valerie,” Hector said, standing up so fast his chair wobbled. He hurried around the desk, his hands hovering near my shoulders like he thought I might fall. “What happened to you? Did that man hurt you?”
“No, Dad,” I said, giving him a small tired smile. “He didn’t hurt me. He just… opened my eyes.”
I went to the small locker room, grabbed my gym bag, and started packing. Extra workout clothes, hand wraps, athletic tape, and a few everyday shirts and pants all went inside. When I came back out, Sofia was leaning on her cane, watching me with sharp, knowing eyes.
“You’re moving out,” she said quietly. It wasn’t a question.
“Damian said I have to live there,” I answered, zipping the bag shut. “If I want a spot in the tournament, I have to stay under his roof. No distractions. Full control of my training.”
Hector shook his head and ran a rough hand through his silver-black hair. “Mija, that place is a fortress. They treat fighters like soldiers. You don’t know what kind of men are locked up in there.”
“I know what kind of men are in there, Dad,” I said, stepping forward and wrapping my arms around his waist. He pulled me close and rested his chin on top of my head. “The kind who can help us save this gym. I have to do this.”
Sofia stepped closer and squeezed my hand tightly. She handed me a spare phone charger and a small notebook. “Go make them sorry they ever let Roxanne touch our name, Val. We’ll take care of the gym here.”
An hour later the iron door of The Crucible closed behind me with a solid click.
The main floor was dark except for the red emergency lights along the concrete walls. The same security guard from the day before gave my bag a cold look as I walked past the front desk, but he said nothing. He just buzzed me through the inner door that led to the living area.
The rooms were as clean and plain as the gym floor. A long narrow hallway with metal doors and gray walls stretched in front of me. It smelled of bleach, floor wax, and strong laundry soap. Room 404 was at the very end of the hall.
I pushed the door open. Inside was a narrow bed with a plain blue blanket, a small wooden dresser, a metal locker for gear, and one high window that looked out over the river. No television. No posters. No comfort. Just a place to sleep, recover, and get ready.
I dropped my bag on the floor and sat on the edge of the hard mattress. My legs ached and the last of the day’s energy drained away, leaving a hollow tired feeling.
Two sharp knocks sounded on the open door.
I looked up. Damian leaned against the doorframe. He had changed into a dark gray long-sleeve shirt with the sleeves pushed up to his forearms. His blue eyes moved around the small room before they landed on my face.
“Settling in?” he asked, his deep voice filling the quiet space.
“It’s cozier than a prison cell,” I muttered, crossing my arms over my sore ribs. “Barely.”
Damian didn’t smile. He stepped inside and stopped a short distance from the bed. “The Crucible is not a hotel, Valerie. While you live under this roof, you follow three rules. Rule one: lights out at ten o’clock sharp. Recovery is just as important as training.”
“And the other two?” I asked, raising an eyebrow.
“Rule two: no outside visitors without my approval. Your sister is the only exception, and even she has to come through the front desk. Rule three: leave your emotional baggage at the door. The other fighters already know who you are. They know about the news, the failed test, and the media circus.”
A cold knot tightened in my chest. “They think I’m a cheat.”
“They don’t care what the media thinks,” Damian said sharply, stepping a little closer. “In here, reputation means nothing. Performance is everything. If you walk onto that floor looking bent and broken while still demanding respect, they will chew you up and spit you out before breakfast. You have to earn your place every single second.”
I met his eyes and refused to look away, even though my heart beat a little faster. “I’m not looking for handouts, Dubois. I’ll earn it.”
Damian stared at me for a long quiet moment. The air between us felt heavy, charged with the memory of our fight and the closed space of the small room.
“Good,” he said softly, his voice dropping lower. He turned toward the door and paused with his hand on the frame. “Get some sleep, Valerie. Tomorrow morning at four o’clock we start rebuilding your foundation from the ground up.”
He walked away down the hallway. The sound of his boots faded into the quiet night.
I stood up, walked to the narrow window, and looked out at the city skyline. My hands were bruised, my body was broken, and my family’s future hung by a thin thread. But as I unzipped my bag and laid out my hand wraps for the morning, the despair from the night before was gone.
In its place was a cold, steady hunger to fight back!
