74. Fuckland'ın Kibirli Prensi

Is this an excerpt you wrote? It’s sharp and emotionally engaging—there’s a nice contrast between his messy vulnerability and her cool, slightly vindictive composure at the end.

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  • Line edits / polishing the prose

  • Pacing ...

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